Quality blog comments

W.A.L.T I know that these blog comments are quality because they are thoughtful, helpful and positive.

Kia ora Charlotte I am Isabella from Paparore school and I am a year five. I enjoyed your poem about the silver ferns.You had a lot of persuasion words .You could of written more and added elaborated a little bit more.Where did you get the idea from ?

Hi Karmi my name is Isabella i am from Paparore school and I am a year five.I liked your holiday writing because you added a lot of detail.I bet you enjoyed going to Christ church and I hope you had a great time.You could of elaborated more.What holiday park did you go to ?

Kia ora Karoro school I am Isabella from Paparore school. I liked your poem about the sea and beach.you elaborated lots.You could've written more and you could of added more persuasive text.Where is the beach located at ?

It was fun doing these blog comments because it was on a shared document and we actually got to go on other peoples blogs.

Our trip to Whatuwhiwhi.

                                                           Whatuwhiwhi

Yesterday we drove on the bus with Te Manga to Whatuwhiwhi to go snorkelling. When we got there we ran out of the bus with our bags and were told to have some morning tea. After morning tea we went down to the beach to play while the other half of the class went snorkelling. When they were done it was Te Manga’s turn, so we stayed at the beach and played while we were waiting for them. At last, we could see snorkels coming closer. “Yay it's our turn,” everyone shouted. So we walked across the road and we slipped on some flippers, slapped on a wet suit and slipped on a mask and a snorkel. When we had put on all the equipment, we headed down to the beach. We crossed the road to the beach and then we dived into the water and started snorkelling.We saw bluefish, a little clear fish and some of us even saw a little jellyfish. It wasn't long until we had to start heading back. When we got to the beach we crossed the road and had a juicy.

Equations maths

Multiplication strategies.

W.A.L.T we learning to solve 10 and fives time tables. 

55x3 = 165

Today I am going to be showing you how to solve 55x3.

First take the 55 and take the five out so that leaves you with fifty.

Next take the fifty and times it by three and that equals 150.

Lastly you need to take the fives and times them by three and that equals 15.

All together that equals 165.

In my opinion solving times tables is easy because your just counting up in in different numbers.Such as tens fives and twos. The thing that I found hard was figuring out how to brake the number up.

What a quality blog comment looks like.

W.A.L.T Write a quality blog comment on A shared document.


Hi, my name is Isabella and I am from Paparore school. I loved your spaghetti marshmallow post and Well done to Zade and Aden for getting first place in the marshmallow challenge.What did you enjoy most ?


       I know that I made A  quality blog comment because I followed the poster.

My Anzac poster

here are some facts about the Gallipoli war
W.A.L.T we are learning to write facts about Gallipoli war.

Up skilling sentences

W.A.L.T We are learning to write complete sentences using verbs and adverbs.

The house stood in the wood

Slowly, the old rickety wooden house started to rot until there was nothing but grass.


The hard part was probably  choosing the start of story. Other than that it was easy and fun.