W.A.L.T We are learning to write show not tell.
5,4,3,2,1 happy new year and I screamed at the top of my lungs with the waves crashing upon my feet and the sand smooshing up in between my toes.
I found this fun because there was a lot of action and stuff like that.
Well done Issy I think your snippet souds really cool.
ReplyDeleteWow Isabella, I think you did a great job showing, not telling. You have included descriptive vocab and made me feel like I'm there with you! Just remember to use the correct punctuation so we know what you are saying, and what you are feeling! Looking forward to reading more of your amazing writing!
ReplyDeletehi issy hazel here i really like this and i think you have done such a amazing gob on this and you should post more stuff on your blog and well keep working hard issy really great work i am really pround of you issy keep working and working hard.
ReplyDeleteNa Hazelrose